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  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Deaths Grief

    Hey Katnes! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...

    Apr 1, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Love

    Hey jayoof! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! Oh, and by the way, welcome to the site! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so ...

    Feb 27, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Crazy

    Hi BookPrincess313! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! Oh, and by the way, welcome to the site! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so ...

    Dec 18, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: For A Girl

    Hi Whosabell and Pal! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was ...

    Dec 11, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Memes

    Hi E.E! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...

    Dec 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: i used to be human

    Hi Kara! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...

    Nov 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Why do I do this

    Hi Whosabell, E.E, and Pal! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what ...

    Nov 30, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Little Water Monsters

    Hi E.E and Pal! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was ...

    Nov 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: On The Other Side of The Page

    Hi BookishBrook! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...

    Nov 30, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bother and Bothered

    Hi Flumadiddle! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...

    Nov 28, 2017
  • Other » General, General Re: For Em- The snake story

    Hi WhosabellCanWrite! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...

    Nov 14, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: ~Suckers 2~

    Hi WhosabellCanWrite! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...

    Nov 6, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, Horror Re: Death by pizza

    Hi LordTachanka! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! And welcome to YWS, by the way! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can ...

    Oct 31, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Lacking In Warmth

    Hi woahhitherepal! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...

    Oct 25, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Pocket Full Of Posies

    Hi Flumadiddle! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...

    Oct 24, 2017


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