Sarah12

I wish I could give this like ten likes. It's beautiful. Great writing, and enjoy the holidays! Sarah12

Thanks! You were correct about the wind, and I will be sure to take all of your opinions into consideration when doing edits. Thanks again!

Thanks! I actually wrote it as lyrics, but I figured it could be either or.

Thank you very much MissLyricz! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it; it's in my "hall of fame" of all the poems I've written. Thanks for the follow! Sarah12

I wrote this forever ago. Anyways.... AlyssaB506 I will go post something right now. YOU BETTER READ IT. And don't call me that. I prefer child. Love you too, Sarah12

Hi! Sarah here to review. First off, I think this was a beautifully written poem. It is truly moving. In the third line of the second stanza, you use the ...

Thanks! Yeah, i know its long. I just wanted to get it all out at once, versus have to wait because you can only do two in a twenty four ...

Okay, so to make a new line, you do Shift Enter, to make a new stanza, it is just enter. I had that problem too, with my first poems.

Thanks!

I'm kind of both. I'm not necessarily popular, but I'm known and respected. People know not to mess with me. I mean, people do see me as crazy, but that's ...

One line poem? I guess that could work............. But you have a good point with it. Not much for me to review, though, so I guess this will stay as ...

I just realized, I entered a previous, unedited version of this poem. Do you think I should put the unedited version underneath the current one so I can see how ...

To make the stanzas, you first have to do Shift Enter to make a new line. It will get rid of the space between lines. Then you can just use ...

Thanks so much for the encouragement! I can't wait to find out if I win. One poem that almost everyone who's read them has liked more is Follow the Wind. ...

Thanks, I should be getting the acceptance letter soon. I'll let everyone know if I win!