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  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: Double-Dactylian

    HI I can't start this review the way I normally do. Its just not that kind of poem(s). I really should pay more attention to the ratings. Anyways, these were... ...

    Apr 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Luna

    Hi! Sarah12 here to review. First off, this was beautiful, and it had a wonderful rhythm, which is definitely the hardest thing to find when it comes to poetry. However, ...

    Apr 5, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Desolate

    Hey! Sarah12 here to review. First off, this was a beautifully written, heartfelt poem. It had a lot of emotion infused into it, which made it all the more enthralling ...

    Apr 5, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The desolated mind

    Hi! Sarah12 here to review. I have to say, this really hit home. The shortness of the poem actually made the point much more clear and sharp. It made me ...

    Apr 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Stones

    Hi! Sarah12 here to review. I really liked the concept of this poem! It's very inspiring and motivational. However, it was a little difficult to read because it didn't have ...

    Apr 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: To Write a Poem

    Hi! Sarah12 here to review. Or try to review, as it is so short. This is very accurate, and it did hit the humorous side of me, although not very ...

    Mar 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Sailing the Storm

    Hey! This was beautiful. It really told a story very well. However, I can't really tell if this is meant to rhyme or not! The first two lines gave the ...

    Mar 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Snow Flurries and Another Storybook

    Hi! Sarah12 here to review. Before I begin, I would like to say that these are some serious relationship goals! I love it. Forward thinking. Okay, let's get into it. ...

    Mar 10, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Return to Oblivion Draft

    Hi! Sarah12 here to review, as requested. First of all, I would like to say, good job all around! Loves: The concept of the story! It is really good. I'm ...

    Mar 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: I want to love what I write.

    Hey! It's Sarah12 here to review this beautifully written poem. The poem flows really well, and it holds emotions that every avid writer will feel at some point. However, like ...

    Mar 1, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: A Disturbing Silence

    Hi! Sarah12 here to review. This is really good! I've been review mostly poetry lately so a short story is a nice change of pace, especially one like this! I ...

    Mar 1, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Companion

    Hi! Sarah12 here to review. I'll start by saying this is really good! There is a lot of imagery that gives the sonnet life. My favorite lines would have to ...

    Mar 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Reborn

    Hi! Sarah12 here to review. For one, this poem is amazing. It perfectly represents the life of a caterpillar/butterfly, and the description in this poem really allows the reader to ...

    Nov 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Fall Into Shadow

    Oh. My. Gosh. THIS IS AMAZING! I can't write like this. I really resonates with the reader, the way you wrote it with a contrast between short and long lines. ...

    Nov 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Satire Re: When Love Turns Into Mockery

    Hi! Sarah12 here to review. First off, this was AMAZING. I love this kind of writing, and it really holds true. Next, I was just wondering: the dots between stanzas? ...

    Nov 24, 2015


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