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Hi! I absolutely loved this poem! I read it out loud and it flowed smoothly all the way through; there were hardly any blips. Anyways, the first half taught a ...

Hi! I think this was very creative and I loved it! The acrostic feature of it was extremely well-done; it did not seem forced at all. Well, I guess you ...

Hi! I agree on the stanza problem. In fact, this might not have been on purpose, but there are very opportune places to break it up after the longer lines. ...

Hi! This was a very good poem. The emotion was expressed well, and the length was just right for the content. However, all the rhyming was extremely forced, as in, ...

Hi! Sorry to nag, but I think it might have been a good idea to do a review first before you post your work! Anyways, I really loved the creative ...

Hi! This is a very good start, especially if you're not a poetry person. It's creative in its themes and I liked it. First of all, though, the title could ...

Hi! I really liked the way you can express emotions in such a short poem without overdoing it. Unfortunately, I think it just didn't flow quite right. When I read ...

Hi! This was a really good poem, and I think it is worth submitting to a contest - with a few tweaks. The flow went pretty well until the end, ...

Hi! This is very good - it gets its point across to the reader without too many questions or confusions, and it really makes one think deep. These are great ...

Hello! I'd say this is pretty good for not being a poetry person. I loved the story; it was a very creative idea. You did very well on rhyming and ...

Hi! Overall tone of voice: intense. Great expression of emotion! The theme is creative, though a little hard to understand. You used a whole lot of really great words, but ...

Hi Tranquility! This is such a heartfelt poem that it left me dazed and blinking after I finished reading it. The emotion was expressed well, and it took almost no ...

This is such a well-written poem, it almost made me cry. Mary really comes out as a character, developed so that it almost feels that I know her personally. Most ...

Hello there! I simply love the theme. Who but a most creative writer would find some time to write about that poor little protractor? Your subtle rhyming is really well ...

Hi! I like this so much - I think it's so much more creative to write songs than poems ( I take it this is a song). I love the ...