Sam

OH, and I caught the Mark Twain reference. Nice, very nice...

I have to agree with Crysi lol. And yes, i finally did get it...after reading the second part. I don't really have any critique, though if I find any, you'll ...

yes i did indeed write part of this...all hail me

Yes, I have to agree with Incandescence- and you, lol. It seemed like you knew where you wanted to go you just didn't know how to say it... Later, I'll ...

hahhahahhahah! I thought the last line was really, really funny. The poem itself was so-so, but I think you did a really good job with it for what it was. ...

Hey...now I get the second one after reading this one again. lol, sorry.

I have to say I liked this a lot. It was way, way better than the original. Although i thought the original was great...??? lol. I can so relate to ...

this was really good. I don't know what to was very beautiful, and obviously heart-felt. I would be mad at the administrators too...Did this really happen to you? If so, ...

haha. I've done that before too...kinda wierd...*start twilight zone theme*

I thought it was quite strange, nonetheless original lol. Butterfly? Faerie? Who knows? We probably will figure it out eventually...lol. I thought it was funny, Skye Demon!

I thought this was really provacative and inspiring. However, you kind of break that kind of YOU GO GIRL!! attitude and make it clunky by using the word 'dream' way ...

If you say it to yourself, it's actually kind of cool. With imagination you can do anything...*pulling a spongebob on you* though some of it was like...wow...your brain doesn't really ...

I thought the basic idea of it was pretty good, you just need to smooth out the bumps, like Hekategirl said. It was kinda up and down and all over ...

yeah lol that's fine. Just credit me. :D Thanks for the critique guys!

Me? lol who is brad talking about...