Sam

Reminds me of the Boulevard of Broken Dreams...*cough* green day obsessed... I think it needs a little fluffing up. It was OK for what it was, but it sounded kind ...

Yeah, Liz, I have to agree with both of them. You're like the queen of analogies! I have to say I liked the first and the last stanzas the best. ...

Of course, I haven't really read much of your stuff, so I don't have anything to compare it to, but I thought this was really good. It's very interesting, very ...

It's an interesting idea, for what it is, but I think you need to flesh it out a bit. This is OK if there's a word limit, but if there ...

This is open to everyone, right? lol I thought this poem made some really good points. You had a to-die-for beginning and end, but you kind of ramble at some ...

I thought this was pretty good. Kind of short, but that was OK for what this was. Very original, and...kind of...strange. But strange in a good way lol. My only ...

It's OK for a first try, but it's definitely not one of your best pieces. For one, it kinda dragged on and on, seemingly going nowhere. For two, it was ...

Yeah, i have to agree with Wulie and Brad. I've read some of your stuff, Chevy, and it usually has a lot more depth and meaning to it. This sounds ...

I thought this was really good. Even with my limited knowledge of English history, this still made perfect sense to me. And, you had a lot of odd and awkward ...

This was really cool...you must have way too much time on your hands. I thought it was quite interesting, though it sounds like it should be a research paper or ...

I thought this was really good, however, you kinda lose me at the beginning. You go on and on about Shiyah, and after a while it's kind of...*snore* But then ...

Wow...this was really good. You have a very unique style, Sabine, that's for sure. Unique in a good way, at least lol. 'All these words are too vague, inaccurate, fleeting, ...

Yeah, I thought this was really good for a rhyming poem, considering I *ahem* don't care much for poems that do. They sound forced, unoriginal, to me, but this one ...

I thought this was really funny...and...true. I love the line 'u r so hott' that's cool. And it fits in with the whole AIM thing... The only thing that I ...

I loved this!!!!! Haha, it reminds me so much of this guy from school...*rambles off into description of hot guy* But the first line...it's kinda...cringe. You're grossed out the entire ...