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SalemReine

There’s beauty in the darkness… and then there’s me

  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Scroll That is History

    Good morning/ afternoon/ evening/ night/ or whatever time it may be! Wren here for a review! @TheWordsOfWolf was correct, I love this poem! Your references to both ancient slavery and ...

    Aug 18, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Twisted Love: When Will I See You Again?

    Good morning/ afternoon/ evening/ night or whatever it is in your corner of the world! Wren here for a little review! I really like this poem! It conveys a sense ...

    Aug 18, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Dragon Thief

    Good morning/afternoon/evening/night! Wren here for a review! I also think @TheWordsOfWolf would like this story! First impression: Wow!!! This is amazing!!! I need more of this story, please tell me ...

    Aug 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: Gotham v. Joker, 1894 (Chapter Four) [Extended]

    Good morning/afternoon/evening/night! Wren here, back on a break for another review! First off: Goodness last time you killed Barbara, that's really going to affect everyone and I'm guessing in this ...

    Aug 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: Gotham v. Joker, 1894 (Chapter Three) [Revised]

    Good morning/afternoon/evening/night! I have come back to read more!! First: I like that little part at the beginning where Richard sees Gordon again! It was nice, not overly sentimental but ...

    Aug 5, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Gotham v. Joker, 1894 (Chapter Two) [New]

    Hiya, Wren here for another review! “Oh I’ve missed this,” Richard Grayson mumbles, YES YES YES The Gray Son of Gotham ahh I'm so glad you're using him!! “You’re a ...

    Aug 5, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Gotham v. Joker, 1894 (Chapter One) [Revamped]

    Good morning/afternoon/evening/night or really just night because you live in Gotham. Wren here to review! First: Oh my gosh I love DC I read the comics and I can't believe ...

    Aug 5, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Stand By Me

    Good morning/afternoon/evening/ night! I'm here for a little review! I really like this poem! The last line kind of hits you when you read it, like an unexpected twist almost. ...

    Jul 29, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: It hurts; I don't care

    Hey there! Good morning/afternoon/evening/night or whatever it is in your dimension. I have come to review your work! First off I want to say how much I loved the repetition! ...

    Jul 29, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: The King That Could Not Rise From the Floor

    Hi there and good morning/afternoon/evening/night or whatever it is in your corner of the galaxy! Wren dropping in for a little review on this compelling story! First off, WHERE IS ...

    Jul 26, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: you can't teach an old narcissist to care

    Hey there! Good morning/afternoon/night or whatever it is in your corner of the earth! I have come to review your spectacular work! First impression: This is a really great poem! ...

    Jul 20, 2021
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: they would never understand

    Hey there! And good morning/evening/night or whatever time it is! First off, I just want to say that this poem spoke to me so much, and I feel like I ...

    Jul 20, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Paranormal Academy | 1.1

    Hello! I am here to review this... obviously... so anyway let's do it! He had been spacing out a lot more recently, which he credited due to his medication change. ...

    Jul 6, 2021
  • Other » Health, Realistic Re: The Journey for Happiness

    Good day/afternoon/evening/night to you! First off I just want to say, this is an amazing piece, and I agreed with it so much. Kudos to you for making the choice ...

    Jun 15, 2021
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: This is the Story

    Good morning, afternoon, evening, night, daybreak, twilight, you know anything that happens within "time." This sounds like the start of something, like a series or a tragedy. It drew me ...

    May 27, 2021


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