SageofthePage

This is a very interesting story, I love the brother and sister relationship. Thank you for not making this romantic. It reminded me of what would happen if me and ...

I liked this one, if at all possible, more than the last one, I think. It was very thought- out and being into philosophy myself I have yummy bits of ...

Hi! Don't worry I was nervous the first time too, but everyone on this site is generally helpful and supportive. we are Writer's united and welcome to the party! So, ...

It does look lovely in typewriter, I might try that. Anyway, I applaud you for both the title and the first sentence of this flick, it pulled the reader in ...

I think this as a beautiful poem, worthy of its name. The repetition in your lines: "And I'll be safe Guarded by his words I'll be secured Surrounded all over ...

This was a wonderful message and a wonderful way o present it! I do have a swing in my backyard, and the one you described here reminded me of it ...

This was a very well-done poem. A willow tree is my favorite kind of tree, so I felt especially connected to this one! There are a few spelling errors, like ...

This was an interesting picture you painted here. I admire the general idea and plot-line. You started out strong and proud, bravo for that! There were a few punctuation errors ...

Beautfiul. Simply wonderful. I give you thumbs up for honesty. I have felt the same way so many times. With perfect clarity, you described the desolation one feels in the ...

I enjoyed the plot theme of this story, and very much like the entire idea of it. I would suggest adding a bit more though. A bit more detail. I ...

My favorite line of this entire thing is simply this: "The fact that we must progress to a new state gives this life meaning." I agree a hundred percent. This ...

I have read about fifteen poems/short stories tonight, but this is one of my favorites so far. Being a very introspective person, i find this deeply connecting and I love ...

Hmm. I agree completely. I've always been an imaginative person, and the last line about it being more pure a light than what is naturally found is an argument I ...

Wow. That was...Intense. Here I was waiting for about seven other countries. Its always interesting to see how other people might look at the country they live in versus the ...

I am not sure what to say to this other than it brought to mind all of the intellectual debates I have had with myself over the ethic differences of ...