Sageleaf

Hi Molly! All I can say is, wow! I love your poem! It is sad and a little haunting, but not hopeless. You did a good job of telling the ...

Wow, I am impressed! You are a very good writer! This poem is very deep, and with a very nice flow. The only problem that I could see was your ...

Hey Gracie! I love this poem! I like the topic, as I feel the some way sometimes, and I like how you write. There are some errors, so anything I ...

Hi! I like your style, it tells a story in a very simple way. Really I only have one thing to point out. Is it? Discriminate. Ignore. Forget. "Is it?" ...

Hi! The first thing that stands out to me about this poem is the italics . You are using the italics for emphasize, but it really isn't necessary, and draws ...

Wow, I love how you portray your anger. You seem to realize that anger is a very complex emotion. You also have relatively equal and balanced lines, which is good. ...

First, animekaratepup, is your review for the right poem? It seems like it isn't. Now, sgppoetry, this is an interesting poem. I am guessing you wrote this to convey the ...

Hey Amelia! I really like this poem, how you actually paint a picture in my head. This is a good example of descriptive poetry. I think a lot of poetic ...

Hi! I'm curious, what was your insperation for this poem? It's very unique in many ways; the topic, the way you tell the story, and the story itself. I'm with ...

Hi Fortissimo! I won't do a complete blow-by-blow as I don't have the time at the moment, but I will point out a couple of things. My general impression is ...

Hi lele! First, I really love this poem. I love the message it sends and the way you choose to portray it. It is moving and strong, but not violent ...

Hello! To start, nice poem! I can feel the emotions behind it. The poem, overall, is nice, but you need to watch your punctuation and capitalization. My dream was the ...

Hey! I like your idea; to me it seems very soft and sweet! Is this poem describing something that happened to you? I belive that if you added a little ...

Hello imaginemymind! I love your poem- it has a slightly haunting feel to me but is at the same time a beautiful story. The last stanza has some repetition of ...