SARAHJO

Hello there! Here to review for ya! Beautifully written. That's the first thing that came to mind upon reading this. The emotions emitted from this piece were quite solemn and ...

Hello there! Haven't been around in a while, it's back to get back to reviewing. And what a lovely and tragic piece to begin with. To start, you have some ...

Hello, there! Sarah here to review your work! First off, I'm going to say I like what you have so far. You started off strong with your choice of words, ...

I'm back! Okay, so second chapter flowed just a tad more roughly than the first. A bit choppy, I'd say, but the quality of the writing was still great. Now ...

Well, hey! It's review day so I picked your promising looking work to start. :) First off, I love your dialogue between Zailia and Morissa. It's highly realistic and gives ...

Hello, there! I saw your work in the green room and was so happy to see that it was the first part. Also, I am quite honored to be the ...

The ramen part made nearly killed me. xD Your rhymes were spot on, though I think you could've kept the rhythm a little bit better. Also, it was a great ...

Hello, there! I'll be reviewing your little piece of work here. As a starter, I like the fact that there were little to know errors regarding your grammar, spelling, punctuation ...

Hi there! Before I begin my review, I'm going to let you know in advance that I'm not accustomed to criticizing poems, so I'll do my best to help you ...

Hello there! Sarah here to er... review for ya! Now this is going to be a bit difficult for me, since I know little about poetry and just about nothing ...

Hello there! Sarah here to review for ya. First, I'm glad to see something original coming into play here. I like things to be unpredictable and interesting, things that capture ...

Love, love, LOVING what you have so far. Though I have a little tip for you (Just to be safe). You might want to bump the age restriction on this, ...

I said I would review for you, so here I am! First things first: Content. Your description is over the top awesome. You paint a real vivid picture for me ...

I'm not even going to bother with an introduction, so let's get right to it. First, I want to applaud you for getting the message across in such a powerful, ...

This is THE definition of "That's so true!". Ah, I do love logic. I have told people this since the beginning of my first spoken words as a child. I ...