Rydia

Thank you very much for the kind words, I'm glad you liked it! :)

Thank you very much for the kind words and feedback! You are right in your assumptions for what being quick on the draw means and I didn't specify the persona's ...

Where have you been all my life

Thank you so much for your feedback and kind words! The spelling mistakes were intentional, but perhaps aren't working out. I'll have to have another think about it, though I'm ...

Yes, I play with words perhaps a little too much in this one. Benchmarked is a rogue phrase that someone attempted to coin a while ago but it didn't take ...

It does have a particular structure, clever you and it's also one of the ones I did for NaPo. I was playing with the Double Dactyl form: (now you have ...

Thanks Speaker!

Thanks! :D

Thanks Birkhoff! :)

Thank you! And you're right on the mark when you say the characters may be dead. Rydia certainly is and the idea was that this is Jabber's grieving process, but ...

I got that part xD But that was obvious from the title so it wasn't a twist and the ending was still flat. Now if you changed your title and ...

At work we call the tilde a 'slop' because we use it in our search expressions to move a few words out each way and that's a process known as ...

We need some kind of system where people say which pieces they're reviewing xD

You're spot on, it is about a trial. Very nice catch there and thank you for the comments, it's always useful to know how someone has interpreted it!

Thank you Lauren! I made a small change to the first line you pointed out so now it's 'their tale' and that works much better so good catch! I'm not ...