Rydia

Hi there, I'm here to review! Specifics 1. I'm going to start with line one because that's often a good place to start and I'm doing a lot of stating ...

It's a crime for this to not have any reviews. If I could give it two I would, but alas there's only me so that will have to do. Specifics ...

Specifics 1. I like this but I feel there are a few places you could play with words even more. For example, the second 'line' I feel should be 'Answers ...

Hi, hi! Structure I like the theme you're working with here but I think the structure you've chosen of such short lines, especially in the beginning, is holding you back. ...

Specifics 1. There's so many lovely lines here but they're feeling very disconnected and for me that breaks the flow of your poem. I wouldn't want them to have a ...

Hello there! Specifics 1. I feel that this would really benefit from a few changes in structure as it's currently not grabbing my attention enough. It has a very slow ...

Theme I wondered for the first couple of stanzas where you were going with this, whether it would be an elderly woman who was no longer attractive or loved and ...

Hello! Specifics 1. You've tackled the formatting well and it's a very subtle sonnet, not really roaring in your face but getting the job done all the same. 2. I ...

Haiiii, here to review! Specifics 1. I think the first line would benefit from a bit of rephrasing. Maybe try, 'Once we fell asleep on the couch' because it's more ...

Haiiii I've added a rating to the title of your piece. Please do this for all future pieces that contain vulgarity or sexual references. Specifics 1. If you copy and ...

Hai! I am here to give you a review :) Specifics 1. I'm not a fan of the format. I don't think it's doing much for this poem and I'd ...

Hi Logo! Okay so here's my review and maybe this will give you a few ideas on how to write some of your own ;) Specifics 1. 1. I am ...

Well this is a good bit of fun, isn't it! I won't comment on the content, except to say I was amused and certainly entertained, but there were a few ...

Hi dream! Specifics 1. I think this would really benefit from moving a few things around to change where the emphasis is! For example, your first two lines are a ...

Hi Captain! I promised you a review and so here I am. Sorry this has taken me an age to get to but hopefully I'll be quicker on part two ...