Rydia

Hi Questio! The link didn't tell me which it was you'd like reviewed so I'm terribly sorry if I went for the wrong one. What I'll do though is, I'll ...

Hello Ben! Ah, a preface in the format of a poem. It's been a while since I've read one of these and I don't think they're often found, though you ...

Hello! Here I am to review :) Specifics 1. I don't like the introduction in that there's already a contradiction. The way the first sentence reads, it seems to imply ...

Here's poem two! Change of Heart 1. Take away the author's note! That's cheating ;) If you want us to know it's from the point of view of a wolf, ...

Hello! Here I finally am to review your poems! Sorry its taken me so long! Escape is (Im)Possible I really love the rhythm of this piece and it has a ...

Hello! Fancy seeing you here ;) Specifics 1. You really jump into the topic straight away and that's good as I don't like to see pages of writing before I ...

Haiiiii! Specifics 1. I think the first sentence should be combined with the second. It's not punchy enough to be a short sentence so go for the scoping, landscape description ...

Haiiii! It seems I have a reputation to uphold; hopefully I won't disappoint. Specifics 1. The old man walked slowly as not to upset the spirits of the night. Just ...

Hi Shadow, here I am! Specifics[/b 1. The opening wasn't amazing but it has a good rhythm and I like the tone of it. It's very engaging. I can't quite ...

Hi! Sorry this took me a lifetime to get to, but here I am :D Specifics 1. You can edit the first post with the new version! It would make ...

Hai! Please note all comments are on this chapter alone and not any previous ones as I've not read them. Specifics 1. Sweat drop. “That’s it?” Avoid things like this ...

This doesn't feel like lyrics to me, more like a poem, so I'll try not to review it with a category in mind on this occasion as then you'd just ...

I'm somewhat removed from my essay writing years, though actually it was only some months ago, but I will try to give some comments on this, even if they end ...

Hi! This is the first chapter I'm reading so I can't comment on anything previous to this, which means if I point out something that's resolved or covered in an ...

Specifics 1. You've got a great use of sounds here and that's working well for you. I think though that actually the first line would read better as 'voices muffled' ...