Rydia

Since I've reviewed all the other first chapters, it would be unfair to skip this one ;) Specifics 1. I don't know the Wings of Fire series so I don't ...

Hey there Yams! Specifics 1. it won't be enough."Good news, bad news I think this line should be split. You don't have enough of a meter going on for it ...

Hello! So I've had a bit of sleep trouble myself, though more in the lucid dreaming department than Insomnia but let's take a look at this... Specifics 1. The first ...

Hello again!Sorry its been a while, I've had a busy week! Specifics 1. Robbie solves the problem of finding seats by approaching two girls sharing a table, and somehow encourages ...

Hello! I'm going to make a few comments as I read through and then give you my general thoughts at the end :) 1. I told myself is it because ...

I don't know who the two characters are - sounds like another anime I need to watch - but I think love is pretty universal and I get the impression ...

Hi, welcome to the site! Just a few small comments on this one: 1. The title is a bit ordinary! It's the first thing your reader sees and on sites ...

This is a clever little poem, though it seems to contradict itself as it says at first that the persona hasn't met a lady of worth yet but without any ...

I found the right one this time! Except I'm probably going to get halfway through and then have to go to work but never mind. Specifics 1. After visiting his ...

I'm not sure if I should be treating this as a piece to review so I'm going to keep it short and start by saying this is a beautiful tribute. ...

Hello again! Specifics 1. Yeah... having it be Preston is too predictable and cliche. I was hoping to come review this chapter and be able to give you brownie points ...

Hello! Just a few comments on this one... Title: I'm not sure watercolours is the right word as I normally think of watercolours as being pale and not very strong. ...

I've had a semi awful day wrestling with the mold in my flat (and mostly losing) so I apologise in advance if this is short! Specifics 1. Robbie even had ...

Hello again! I've decided I'm going to work through your novel for June :) I may well pick up one of the others another month but you're first pick so ...

This was an unexpected surprise but not a bad one! I thought with a title like that it would be about travel but instead it's kind of a commentary on ...