Rydia

To answer your questions first: 1. The poem's length is fine. If anything it could be a bit longer as there's not a lot of space here to convey much ...

I love this so I don't expect I'll have much to comment on but here goes nothing: 1. I both do and don't like that the title is the first ...

Hey there, let's see if we can start moving this out of the Green Room. Just a tip for next time though, you might want to post each chapter separately ...

Hey there! I thought I'd take a look at this and I'm going to start by giving some specific comments as I read through and then a few more general ...

Hey, thought I'd take a look at this! Specifics 1. I like the use of the white space in those first four lines - it almost gives the impression of ...

Hey there! I've not read any of the earlier parts so feel free to ignore me if I point out something which you think you've already covered. Specifics 1. The ...

Hi there! I've not reviewed much poetry recently so apologies if I'm a bit rusty! Line-By-Line 1. So I know the saying is generally crocodile tears so it's interesting that ...

Hey there! So, I should be going to bed but my team are barely holding the lead for review day and this is still in the green room and is ...

Okay, it looks like you're getting that fifth review today afterall! Specifics 1. Chip was striding around the helm. There was a big winding ramp mounted into the wall right ...

Oh look you have another chapter in here and it's still one away from the last I read so it's totally in-keeping with my tradition. Specifics 1. Theobald looked at ...

Hi Again! So, I'm keeping up my tradition of reviewing random chapters of this and promising to one day fill in the gaps :D Specifics 1. Love the opening and ...

Okay, last chapter and then I'm going to have a break and watch an episode of Grimm. I'm getting pretty obsessed with the show so I can't guarantee it won't ...

So I reviewed something else in between the last chapter and this one, which means I already did my three reviews and I'm going for a snack. I will be ...

Hi Buddy! So I normally start these things off by rambling about what I'm up to or whatever my thoughts generally are at the time. Like, I'm aiming to write ...

I really want a yogurt or a chocolate biscuit but I think I'll make that my reward for getting 3 reviews done since I've decided that's my minimum requirement for ...