Rurouni

Hello, I really loved this! Its really amazing and I would love to see more. This is very descriptive of the fox. And I love how you made the the ...

Hello, This is a little confusing. I don't really understand the coffin or stone part, its very confusing to me. I like it so far. I think you need to ...

This is really cool. This may just be me, but I'm getting mermaid vibes from this. Its really good and I really like it, I would make sure to describe ...

This is really good. I have one thing though. It is: Small droplets of sweat trickled down his arms and he breathed in low, hoarse manner. I think it should ...

Hello, I liked it, but I felt you used strange, strangeness, too much, I understand you want to use it often, but I think its just a little to much. ...

Ohh, I really liked this! I like how you told us about how our bodies are programmed, it showed us a hint to the next sentence, that I liked. And, ...

This is most defiantly a W.I.P. The whole thing was one paragraph. It was extremely confusing because of it. I really wish it was in a better format, it was ...

I think this was pretty, interesting. I think you should describe her a little more, like, what color skin does she have, etc... And I would remove the "fast enough ...

Heyz I have a few things, first, more description! Please! What does Rek look like? Is he tall, dark, blonde, redhead? What does the king look like? Is he adorned ...

I would say, you need to put more, lines. More of a taste of the story. And is sliver silver? And, I'm confused by him. Is he an orb or ...

Wow. This is interesting, it reminds me of someone trying to forget their old love/lover. I love it, its beautiful, and well written. Its well made, and flows. I would ...

That was amazing, its very mind opening, especailly the last paragraph, I can't find anything wrong with it. Its beautifully written, and the Idea is lovely. I think I have ...

Intersting.... I see, this is Rek.... Okay, I got a little confused, did he push her off the boulder? Or just was being playful? And, what did she feel when ...

Wow, I did not expect this at all. Its an okay poem, but its very dark. It sounds like these are instructions a lover would give to his/her lover. Its ...

This is very confusing. I honestly didn't get it. Maybe you could re-formatt it. Its just very confusing, and I din't ynderstand who the voice is. I didn't get the ...