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Hello Nunyabusiness here to review! I love this poem and I think it is very well placed, though I would have to criticize some little things... look at the second ...

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Hello Autumn thank you for reviewing my poem! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Cool, I'm glad! And yes I thought of the Hobbit...Dale. Haha :)

Your welcome you earned it! Job when done! ;)

Thanks I will try to make any necessary corrections. Thank you for your review! :)

Okay, cool and your welcome!

Haha thank you........it's Zelda. ;)

Thank you for your review! I will check out your poem, keep in touch! :)

Wow I just simply love this poem Gerbeh!! I would have to agree with xJupiter about the format because it does make this seem like a short story when you ...

Thank you! :)

Thanks. Yes, this indeed was the first poem I have even written. The part, "Lady of love the olive branch dove," was referring to how graceful and beautifully elegant this ...

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Hey Toto, I like your poem. The formation is a little awkward though but this is new to me and also enjoyable. Keep up the good work! I'd like to ...