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Hello, FallWolf. Let me just say, 'wow'! This was so funny to read the wording was like magic and I could picture everything. It was all so sweet and it ...

Hello, HolographicLadybug. This work was marvelous! I really enjoyed it. The dialog was cool and I thought everything to be realistic. I was wondering about the shingles though. Why didn't ...

Hello, CHRISSY321. I loved this poem!! This is so cool...(pst. I think I have the YWS addiction too. It's spreading!) Really, it was soooo cute. I'm actually quite jealous. Thirty ...

Hello there! I'm going to start off by asking why it's placed in the "supernatural" section. The poem was good. I don't have any family members that love cars that ...

Hello, fortis. This was very cool. I was taken into a void myself with just me and this poem in front of me. The imagery is very creative and the ...

Hello, throwaway. I'd like to start off by saying, this was really cool. I've never read anything like it. I almost enjoyed the fact that there was no conversations. The ...

Hello, austinturtle. This poem was rather creative the punctuation was good, you capitalized the firs word in every stanza (yay!), and it flowed. I don't remember there being any breaks ...

Hey is Keepwriting here again. I loved this so much (I already cant wait to read more xD). The description and feel to your writing made me feel like I ...

Hello, na3f. Wow. This is really cool! I can't wait to read the next part. I was going to make a long review but I couldn't really find fault in ...

Hello, boonalicious123. I want to say first, welcome to YWS. Looks like you're new here. This was so amazing. I felt like my mind was taken into a different realm. ...

Hello Catlover211. I loved your poem. The message was sad because you've got no man to spend your Valentines day with; but I liked it. I can also relate to ...

Hey it's me again (I said I'd be here). Just wanted to say, I like this chapter better than the first one and I think it was a lot more ...

Hello, moonpolice. I was planning on reading your second chapter but I hadn't read your first one yet so... why not?! I liked this very much and I think I'm ...

Hello, Los3Lov3. I did like reading your poem. It was interesting cause at the end I started going into a whole realm of thought (which was cool). I do have ...

Hello, HorsiiAD! I really enjoyed your story and didn't think this was a waste of my time at all (which usually is the case). Anyway, I enjoyed the struggles they ...