RoyalHighness

Royal here for a review! This is SO COOL AND I'M VERY EXCITED ABOUT THIS! I have a friend who 3D printed a puzzle for me, and it's totally cool ...

Royal here for a review! I've never seen this anime, so I'll just stick to comments about the technical aspect of the poem. I think the line "Who we really ...

Royal here for a review! I can totally relate to this because I have said the exact same thing before in my life, and I think you did a wonderful ...

Hey, Patrick! Royal here for a quick review, as promised. So Holysocks pretty much touched on everything about the punctuation. I think you'd really like reading Cormac McCarthy's stuff because ...

Ho. Ly. Crap. Just. Whoa. Okay. Little things first? I would kill for more descriptions of the place and the people. You write simply without being simplistic; you set up ...

RoyalHighness here to review! Let's get down to business, shall we? So, this has a few issues, but we'll work through them together. The first line is a good example ...

RoyalHighness here! Let's start, shall we? So, I'm not a fan of the quotations around the word "monsters." I think it takes away from the effect that that word can ...

RoyalHighness has arrived for a review! I love form poetry, so I have nothing but kind words and praise for this. I love the incorporation of the "white spots" mentioned ...

RoyalHighness here for a quick review! This was cute and fun and light! But before I spout praise, let's get to the nitty gritty. It was perfect until I hit ...

I read this about half an hour ago, and got busy on something else so now I'm going to return a lovely compliment because, really, compliments are all I have ...

This was pretty good for the time constraint. Let's go over some technical errors to get started, shall we? You need a comma after, "Moments later." You switched tenses temporarily ...

Great chapter, Bella! Even though I'm not caught up, I immediately felt at home in Mercy's interesting point of view. You do a fantastic job of drawing lines to show ...

Nikachuuuu Okay so this was pretty intense. I got vertigo just from reading it. We are a couple of hot messes, aren't we? Alright, there was a "to," that needs ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! So recently you told me the backstory to this poem, and honestly I wasn't sure what to make of it. I couldn't really grasp the ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! As a Nerdfighter and TFIOS-lover, I can say I thoroughly enjoyed this. I have very little except praise so let's get on with it! And ...