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Re: My One and Only Love
Hi, here with a review. First of all, I wanted to say that tge tittle really grabbed my attention. I like how it rhymes because it gives it an beautiful ...
Aug 26, 2016 -
Re: to the next girl who loves him
Hi, here with a review. First of all, I really like how you've decribed this boy. I could really imagine this boy tht you've described beautifully. I like the tittle, ...
Aug 26, 2016 -
Re: Lost In Time
Thank you for your review, I will go back and change it
Aug 26, 2016 -
Re: Last Fifty years in music.
Hi, umm I think you were ON POINT with these points. I really likes how you've tried to do something diffrent! I really enjoyed reading it(I totally agree with you ...
Aug 7, 2016 -
Re: Crimson Seas and Burning Suns
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Aug 7, 2016
Hi, here with a review! First of all, I really liked your description because it has strong imagery and I could really imagine this happening. Also, I really liked the ... -
Re: A suicide note
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Aug 7, 2016
Wow, I really enjoyed reading this. Even the tittle itself captured my attention and when the note finishes,it makes me wonder what could have happened? Why did it happen? I ... -
Re: A suicide note
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Aug 7, 2016
Wow, I really enjoyed reading this. Even the tittle itself captured my attention and when the note finishes,it makes me wonder what could have happened? Why did it happen? I ... -
Re: Lost In Time
Thanks for your input %uD83D%uDC4D
Aug 7, 2016 -
Re: Him...
Hi, first of all I really liked how you started the story- it felt as if you were talking directly to me and it made me feel more involved. I ...
Aug 6, 2016 -
Re: for him.
Hi, I just wanted to say that I love the fact that you used short sentences and repetition. Also, I really like the fact that you ended on a short ...
Aug 6, 2016 -
Re: Life as I Live it [PART 1/2]
Thank you!
Jul 27, 2016 -
Re: daddy's girl
Hi! I really like your poem. It was short but really put your point across. I found that many people could relate to this. I like the layout and the ...
Apr 7, 2016 -
Re: to my parents, who will never like me
Hi! The poem is really good! I like the choice of vocabulary you have used! I also like the simile you have used especially this one: "Like I'm the the ...
Apr 1, 2016 -
Re: Can't We Just
Hi there! I really liked your poem, I found it touching and cute. Well done! Keep up the good work!
Mar 19, 2016 -
Re: When I was 4... a wierd story
Hi there! I really found it a weird story but at the same time it was funny. I would hate it if I broke my thumb. It was a really ...
Mar 18, 2016