Rosy234

Hi, here with a review. I really liked the title, you don't need to change it (in my opinion) because it grabbed my attention. I like the rhyming scheme as ...

Hi, here with a review. First of all I really liked the plot of the story, it was different but understandable. I really liked it when the manger was coming ...

Hi, here with a review. The title grabbed my attention straight away, and I really enjoyed this piece. I like how you've repetition and mixed physical scars with emotional ones, ...

Hi, here with a review. I like the similes you've used, the vocabulary, it comes together and makes it all imaginative. I like the fact that you don't start a ...

Hi, here with a review. First of all, the title itself grabbed my attention, and it wasn't until the end I found out that you've written it from a girl's ...

Hi, here with a review. First of all, I like your rhyme scheme and I thought it brought a flow element to this piece. I like your rhetorical questions within ...

Hi, here with a review. First of all I really liked your titles, it captured my attention. The structure overall, I was happy with. The rhyme,e scheme and the vocabulary ...

Hey, here with a review. Firstly, I was attracted to the tittle, it makes questions arise. Next,I would like to say I quite like the layout of the poem, the ...

Hi, here with a review. First of all the tittle really gripped me. I really liked the way you've described this scenery but I was disappointed as I was expecting ...

Hi, here with a review. First of all, I really liked the personification you've used e.g. "the sun kissed" and I also like the structure. The thing I liked most ...

Hi, here with a review. The tittle itself made me want to read this. I like the way you've made this piece rhyme. I also like the way you've chosen ...

Hi, here with a review. First of all I really like the way you've layed out your poem, it really flows. I also like your rhyme scheme and your use ...

Hi, here with a review. First of all, I find the tittle really good as it is short and attractive. I really liked how you've gone into detail about what's ...

Hi, here with a review. The titles itself captured my attention as it's short and it makes me wonder what it could be about?I really like how it's short but ...

Hi, here with a review. First of all, the title is very attractive and it makes you ask questions. I also like how you've used a rhyming scheme; it makes ...