Rook

Hello! First off, this was a really beautiful poem. It really was. It was so simple, yet so emotional. Great job. There are just a few tiny nit-picks that would ...

Hello! When I first read your title, I thought it was “The weary Coast” like, a seashore, so when you started off talking about a coat, I was very intrigued. ...

This is so beautiful and sad and perfect and depressing and lovely all at the same time. You really used the rhyming to your advantage (this my friends is how ...

Hello! This was an interesting poem that I think a lot of people can relate to. I think the subject matter was pretty solid, and your imagery was pretty good ...

Hello! I love the obvious effort you put into this, and you made it work pretty well. I also like your topic(s). I've honestly never heard of a palindrome poem ...

Heya! I really enjoyed this poem/these lyrics. One thing I'll say upfront is I think as a poem, I don't like the repetition of the chorus, maybe you could've put ...

This was beautiful. The imagery and the sensory details were just stunning. It feels like a poem I can just float away on. I love the repetition of a seemingly ...

Hello~ This was really lovely. I especially love the first verse; that's what drew me in. You have amazing images in the first verse as well as all throughout the ...

Hiya~ This was a really quality piece. What immediately drew me in to it was the idea that you expressed in the first paragraph: guards are expendable. I was drawn ...

Hello! This was a very interesting poem. There's a few places I think you should check out spelling and grammar-wise, but I think that otherwise, this was really well done. ...

I absolutely loved this! I was drawn to the name, and the first stanza really drew me in. I like the way you had your first stanza as a kind ...

This was really done well. ^_^ It had good flow and the metaphors were lovely. The imagery was amazing: I could picture it all from the start. I especially like ...

Hello Sparks! I really like this poem. Especially the deep, thick essence it had to it. (I sat there for a long time trying to figure out what I was ...

I'm so glad you posted this Alpaca! :D I really like it. I get that it's a sestina, so I get the repetition. One thing about the repetition though that ...

Hey SparkToFlame, My precious dame! I’m here to review! Whoop de doo! I’m going to review line by line, if you don’t mind! “Here, have a poem.” Don’t mind if ...