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Hi! It occurred to me (again) that I owe you some reviews, so here's this one. I like this poem. Tis a good poem. You presented it very well, and ...

Hi Tenyo! This poem was really really spectacular! I really liked the little thing you had going on with the lines set apart. I’d never seen that done before, so ...

Hello! This was a short little poem wasn't it. First the things I liked: -The little detail about the capitalized "G." That was a very deep little sentence. -I like ...

Hello! What immediately struck me was the honesty of this poem. You just convey your feelings with such emotion, using great images to help. I really like the imagery in ...

Aw :( this is a sad poem. I think this worked really well with the quote that you pulled (I really like that quote too!), even though you don’t make ...

Haunting! There were two places that I feel the rhyme was just a little too forced, but I just realized as I was reading this that (for me at least) ...

Hello! This was an interesting poem. I liked the images: the reader can really picture every part of the poem. I like the metaphors included, like the part with the ...

Hello! This poem had some really fantastic imagery. Although to me, it kind of felt like you were just writing pretty (they were honestly beautiful) words down with little meaning. ...

Hello! This was a really wonderful poem. I really love it. At first when you mentioned "journals," I though you meant like a magazine or a political journal or something. ...

This was really really good. You really captured the horrible feeling that comes with wanting something that hurts you. Anastasia is such a beautiful name, and anorexia (that is what ...

Hi pengu! I don't know if it's just that the tv is on right now and I can't focus, but I'm not quite sure I understand this poem. I'll attempt ...

Hello! I'm not quite sure how to review an essay type of thing, but I'll do my best! I like how you started off with the definition, but I feel ...

Hello! This is a very interesting poem you have here. I'm not quite sure what you meant in writing this poem, but I'll attempt to review it nonetheless. I think ...

Hello! I'm here with some criticism, so take it with a grain of salt. ;) In the first stanza you use the word “it” a lot. I think it would ...

Hello~ First off: I love the red dress Santa wears a dress? o_O Secondly, the not-bold, bold bothers me, but if that was on purpose, then keep it. I just ...