Rook

Okay stop your begging. Here am I. I'll take a payment of something cold and sweet (and preferably chocolate-flavored). First off, the title is intriguing, so good job with that. ...

:[ UGHHH POMPPPP WHY ARE YOU SO TALENTED AT MAKING MY HEART ACHE hallo. I'm here again. in case you couldn't tell. Something that I really liked first up is ...

Okay pomp. I am here to save you from the wretched green room and to save myself from a reviewing dry season. This poem speaks to me. We really must ...

Hiya! Here to fulfill your WRFF Request! So, usually I'm not a fan of these longing "oh my husband has gone off to war" types of things, but this one ...

Hello! Here to complete the WRFF request! it seems that this poem is about giving up religion? I am unsure. One of the major problems about this is how vague ...

Hello! I will agree with what the previous reviewer said about heavy poems and cereal, as well as what they said about the repetition of gluttonous. While I think you ...

I'm here to review! First of none of these actually count as real haiku. Here are some resources that will help you write this form of poetry and understand it ...

This was actually really interesting. I liked it. The rhyming attempts at the beginning were awkward. I say get rid of them. This was a unique view point about the ...

Hello! I didn't notice that this was in the horror genre at first, so I was really surprised. You really did pull a fast one on me. I was expecting ...

Hello! Your poetry is definitely improving. I love to watch it grow! :) So this was a beautiful poem, and I like what the sentiments appear to be, but it's ...

Hello! I know I already kind of gave you a mini review of this in chat, but I'm here for a little more depth. The thing I said about subtlety ...

Hello! First off the over use of the ellipses (the ...'s) REALLY BOTHER ME. They read like they're supposed to sound dramatic, but to be honest they're just stupid. Sorry, ...

Hello! I really liked the sentiments in this poem. they're very honest and truthful. I think this is an idea that we've all pondered, and while that might mean it's ...

Hello! This was a simple poem with a nice sentiment. I love the "God loves all" theme. Usually I find religious poems almost unbearable preachy. This one was not unbearably ...

Hello! I'm going to be brutally honest in this review, so if you don't like that, then feel free not to read it. That's what we're all putting our work ...