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Hey ChocolateCello~ Hmmm I like the views you have in this, and some people in particular need to have this thing plastered to their ceilings so they can see it ...

Hello! I'm here for a quick review. take it with a grain of salt. I'm just trying to help okay? So this poem is like, really cliche. It starts off ...

Hello! I liked this poem. I liked the story of what happened here. I like the silence of the poem, how little happens externally, but internally, inside the narrator's head, ...

hey racket! I really like what you've got going on here. It's a feeling I think almost everyone can relate to. There are nights where you JUST CAN'T SLEEP. No ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I can already see you know a lot about poetry. This was a lovely poem. You've gone some real talent here. I love the images ...

Hey Pomp! Okay wow. Some things I really love about this are your voice that really shines through in this, the flow is also very excellent, and as always, your ...

Hiya! Cute poem. I'm glad we can all agree on hatred of comic sans. The sad thing is that I'm noticing it more and more in the official announcements they ...

Hiya sparks! I really like this poem. I love the images you use, your diction... it's really pretty solid. One thing I wish was here was a more... ordered? direct? ...

Hey there! One thing that could be cool would be if you hand-wrote this and scanned it in, and then provided a translation because obvs it's gonna get hard to ...

Hey aley! So, this is quite an interesting concept. I enjoyed the poem a lot. That said I do have a few things to say that might help you improve ...

Yo again. I'm gettin' those 50 reviews any way I can. Let's do line by line, this time, shall we? 1: I really like the picture I'm getting with "words ...

Hey empole! Random thing: before I even read the poem, my eyes were drawn to the "i am so -- i am -- i --" right there, and saw how ...

Hey disco! So the idea of this was very sweet, and I'm sure that whoever requested it is/will be happy with it as-is. But there are a couple execution problems. ...

Hello! I love the word choice you use in this. Mmm I love the use of velveteen. Makes me think of the bunny. You have lovely larger images too, with ...

Hello summer! You have the beginnings of something really good here. I can tell there is a story worth tell here, a feeling worth feeling. You have good images, and ...