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Re: Audacity is My Ashes
I really liked this. I like the leading of the readers eyes around the page, I think it puts a really nice emphasis on words whilst keeping up and adding ...
Oct 10, 2025 -
Re: Final Girl
I love horror so I am very excited to review this! I think the dialouge was really good, the yelling after choking on her words when stacy is taking about ...
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Re: The Means to Travel: A U.S. History Screen Play Assignment (Scenes 1-2)
This was really really cool, you should be forced to write more this was brilliant. I love the concept, and it was produced really well. The world building required for ...
Sep 24, 2025 -
Re: he loves me, he loves me not, i beg in church and bed
This is a brilliant poem which, from how I've interpeted, talks about the toxicity in poster-boy femininity when it comes to interacting in relationships through it. The ambiguity of who ...
Sep 24, 2025 -
Re: Pale Yellow
The descriptions of seemingly random things with very emotional ties to the subject is the best kind of metaphor. I like how you've made the big contrasts really casual through ...
Sep 21, 2025 -
Re: Chapter 1. Interview #1. Not My wife.
I really enjoyed reading this. I am a big fan of horror and this was right up my alley. The writing of the unknown guy's dialouge is really good, it's ...
Sep 21, 2025 -
Re: House made of Sparklers (A song about Hyperfixation)
These lyrics are really good and set up a really effective and interesting metaphor. I think when it comes to songs, for me at least, the music matters more than ...
Sep 14, 2025 -
Re: What is Love?
I love the language in this, it reminded me of Shakepeare's Sonnet 116. There is a complete lack of insecurity which comes from the fast pace and structure of the ...
Sep 12, 2025 -
Re: You were there
I really like this poem, very ambiguous especially the last line. A relationship is known and I interpreted it as a friednship that has turned so dramatic and hurtful that ...
Sep 10, 2025 -
Re: save me
I really like the interpretation of death this poem shows. The language showing how immersed we are in the world and with, I'm assuming based off of 'mother', mother nature, ...
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Re: The Love my Parents Have.
I think the subject is a very important one here, reflecting on your parents which is normally a pretty difficult and saddening thing but here it shows a very positive ...
Sep 9, 2025 -
Re: the tulips are now red (part 1)
I really like this. I like the vague yet specific language I think it keeps the reader engaged and the tone of the poem the only known thing about it ...
Sep 1, 2025