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RituparnaBhowmik

  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Untitled

    the poem is creating an imagery and we the readers are gradually getting engrossed but just when we are at the threshold the poem ends- yes i would really say ...

    Mar 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Tables

    this poem is sweet and it can form a good part in a long narrative, or a poem in a story or novel or somewhere else, but standing alone it ...

    Mar 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: Dreams

    this poem is a wonderful work and i am glad that i got the scope to review it. this gives very few grounds of criticism however i would like to ...

    Mar 11, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: half moons

    okay this is a really good piece. but i would have liked it to continue. it felt like a shall chapter - actually just a single image- of a bigger ...

    Mar 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: idk first poem---not very good

    this poem is cute and as it is your first poem it is quite recommendable. your inspiration for this poem might as well be very beautiful for the part of ...

    Mar 10, 2015
  • Other » Spiritual, Culture Re: Holy Effect

    the poem i get is meant for Jesus and you might be a follower but with no opinion on religious ground the poem is incomplete the two stanza's do not ...

    Mar 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: We Chose Marble

    the poem is touching and focuses on a spiritual theme, however it ends all of a sudden. i would like to really know "is this poem incomplete?" when i started ...

    Mar 10, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: [Revised Title in Process]

    this work is slightly confusing. i am really confused i mean- what is the state of this woman, who is she, is she a mother whose child passed out or ...

    Mar 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: ???The End of The World

    this is a wonderful piece i read in long time. it leaves very less scope for criticism however i sportingly offer a few firstly the end of the world is ...

    Mar 10, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: I. Rain Machine

    the thought is beautiful description of rain. the work indeed throws a good imagery and is quite perfect to criticize, however in parts i find it quite misfitting- first of ...

    Mar 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: The time I'll leave you...

    the poem is well written and engrosses a reader in your life. however the theme is quite rough. depression might overcast a work and often beautifies it. however here in ...

    Mar 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: sigh

    well i can feel your distress in your words but love is unfair. i life the way you portray the imagery where a deep breadth is left at the back ...

    Mar 9, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Literature Re: Fisher King in Hiding

    this poem is really vivid. but over the top mystery i must say. moreover the size is quite large to attract readers given your hard thoughts and expression. i am ...

    Mar 9, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Miracle of My Song

    really good work any anyway the spaces are not that necessary. music is really in my soul too but i have a doubt that why were your parents against it. ...

    Mar 9, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Violins, Size 4 Flats, and Fishtail Braids

    I would like to defend you from yourself as you certainly are a poet. I count emotions more important than literary devices in poetry. and when it comes to this ...

    Mar 9, 2015


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