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Re: Untitled
the poem is creating an imagery and we the readers are gradually getting engrossed but just when we are at the threshold the poem ends- yes i would really say ...
Mar 11, 2015 -
Re: Tables
this poem is sweet and it can form a good part in a long narrative, or a poem in a story or novel or somewhere else, but standing alone it ...
Mar 11, 2015 -
Re: Dreams
this poem is a wonderful work and i am glad that i got the scope to review it. this gives very few grounds of criticism however i would like to ...
Mar 11, 2015 -
Re: half moons
okay this is a really good piece. but i would have liked it to continue. it felt like a shall chapter - actually just a single image- of a bigger ...
Mar 11, 2015 -
Re: idk first poem---not very good
this poem is cute and as it is your first poem it is quite recommendable. your inspiration for this poem might as well be very beautiful for the part of ...
Mar 10, 2015 -
Re: Holy Effect
the poem i get is meant for Jesus and you might be a follower but with no opinion on religious ground the poem is incomplete the two stanza's do not ...
Mar 10, 2015 -
Re: We Chose Marble
the poem is touching and focuses on a spiritual theme, however it ends all of a sudden. i would like to really know "is this poem incomplete?" when i started ...
Mar 10, 2015 -
Re: [Revised Title in Process]
this work is slightly confusing. i am really confused i mean- what is the state of this woman, who is she, is she a mother whose child passed out or ...
Mar 10, 2015 -
Re: ???The End of The World
this is a wonderful piece i read in long time. it leaves very less scope for criticism however i sportingly offer a few firstly the end of the world is ...
Mar 10, 2015 -
Re: I. Rain Machine
the thought is beautiful description of rain. the work indeed throws a good imagery and is quite perfect to criticize, however in parts i find it quite misfitting- first of ...
Mar 10, 2015 -
Re: The time I'll leave you...
the poem is well written and engrosses a reader in your life. however the theme is quite rough. depression might overcast a work and often beautifies it. however here in ...
Mar 10, 2015 -
Re: sigh
well i can feel your distress in your words but love is unfair. i life the way you portray the imagery where a deep breadth is left at the back ...
Mar 9, 2015 -
Re: Fisher King in Hiding
this poem is really vivid. but over the top mystery i must say. moreover the size is quite large to attract readers given your hard thoughts and expression. i am ...
Mar 9, 2015 -
Re: The Miracle of My Song
really good work any anyway the spaces are not that necessary. music is really in my soul too but i have a doubt that why were your parents against it. ...
Mar 9, 2015 -
Re: Violins, Size 4 Flats, and Fishtail Braids
I would like to defend you from yourself as you certainly are a poet. I count emotions more important than literary devices in poetry. and when it comes to this ...
Mar 9, 2015
