RituparnaBhowmik

It's a very good trial at sonnet. I really liked your use of imagery and at places it was really mature . specially your thought where two candles combine to ...

Wow. Your poem was strong and powerful and in a way I would call it gruesome but with a good ring in it. Well hi this is Rituparna for a ...

Hi there its Rituparna for a review, I loved your poem it was super cute and too sweet. It really brings back all the high school memories the crush and ...

Hi there its Rituparna for a review, Now your poem is earnestly written with a deep tinge of romance, rather attraction that I will call it. It's good as youbportray ...

First of all hello I am rituparna, I am back after a very long break and this is the first review I am writing after my return so pardon me ...

hi there its Rituparna for a review, your writing is intriguing , its partly dark but that adds a lot of interest to it. As you begin each stanza with ...

hi its Rituparna for a review, your poem was cute and clear about what you wanted to tell. however i would suggest a few amendments. please pardon me if i ...

hi there, its Rituparna for a review. your poem was very cute and sweet. its like the imaginations of a child. i really likes your thought , i guess you ...

hi its Rituparna for a review. your poem looks quite good, and its something new to see around. i like your use of specifics and you really made each moment ...

hi there, its Rituparna for a review. you have a good scope of shining in poetry as you have a clear thought, and you can pen down what you feel. ...

That is a really really sweet poem. i loved your concept and also how you told simple things in simple words. the use of direct speech really emphasized your talent, ...

hi there its Rituparna for a review, your poem was very interesting, unconventional and original. this is somewhat the best poem i saw in days. so you completely earned my ...

hi there, its Rituparna for a review. your poem was quite impressive and it has a feel of personal touches and experience as i can see in the line " ...

hey there donizback, i am happy to review your poem after long. i like this thought and the art of slow walking to the climax. however i would like to ...

As you mention the age at the beginning it makes the poem age specific.you have to think and write like a three year old and telling simple things in simple ...