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Re: prologue
Hello! RippleGylf here. :D Firstly, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your time on the site. As far as novel chapters go, this is a rather short one. Admittedly, ...
May 11, 2017 -
Re: I am a Poet
Hello! RippleGylf here. :D You cover a rather commonplace topic, as far as poetry is concerned. While I completely understand the motivation behind it (obviously, poetry is very important to, ...
May 10, 2017 -
Re: Not Sorry
Hi! RippleGylf here. :D First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy being on the site. I really like the way the hanging indent looks, though I fear ...
May 8, 2017 -
Re: Ten Gallon Tank
Hello! RippleGylf here for a review. ;) I've never had a job interview, but this is very much how I would imagine it to be. You covey the anxiety of ...
May 4, 2017 -
Re: See that Girl
Hello, Ripple here for a review. ;) This is a poem dealing with a very poignant subject, and I really liked the mirror symbolism throughout. I wish you used it ...
May 1, 2017 -
Re: (Labelled WEEDS)
Hello! Ripple here. Felt like I should review this, even with Review Day so close. The first thing that sticks out to me personally is the reiteration of the title ...
Mar 23, 2017 -
Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 2.5
Hello! Ripple here. :D Hope you're having a wonderful review day. ;) As a disclaimer, I haven't read the rest of it yet, so I don't have any context as ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 21 ~ The Dream Felistia
Hello! Ripple again. Disclaimer again: while I am somewhat familiar with the characters, I have almost no context plot-wise. Ish. While you generally do a good job of it, there ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 17 ~ Meeting the Outsiders
It's been way too long since I've had the pleasure of reading this story. :D As a disclaimer, it's been a while, and I haven't gotten myself caught up. However, ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: Bad Poetry
Hello! Ripple here. Hopefully you've been having a wonderful RevMo! I think that this is probably the most demeaning poem I have ever read, which is a tone I've seldom ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: Katelyn-Superhero In Progress
Hello! Ripple here. I think this is the first time that I have seen Marvel fanfiction on here. Being a Marvel fan myself, I am really excited to review this. ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: Whomerlock Chapter 10
Hello! Ripple again. I think that I read this when you originally posted it, but didn't review it then. Well, I suppose I ought to review it now. I'm not ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: My Ghost
Hello! Ripple here on this... interesting... Review Day. One of the things that really stuck out to me was the overall rhythm of the piece. You do an absolutely fantastic ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: A Message From Ginny
Hello! Ripple here. :D First of all, I absolutely loved this. I am also a huge Harry Potter fan, and this was fairly well-written. I do have a few nitpicks, ...
Sep 20, 2016 -
Re: Frost Lark News 9/18/16
Hello! It's me again. :) Wonderful piece you have here. Honestly, it really feels like a night vale piece. You do a great job of establishing that kind of tone ...
Sep 20, 2016
