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Re: Pvnk!
Hey! CHRISSY here with a review! Ok first off, Why the name, what gave you this idea? I find this very.... different! :P It does suit your username! Ok, now ...
Jan 15, 2015 -
Re: A Little Girl Grew Up In Here
Hello! CHRISSY here for a review! Ok, first off, I actually find it cool the way the stanzas were arranged! made it more interesting! Ok, well this poem is great. ...
Jan 15, 2015 -
Re: Twisted Lives.
Hi! CHRISSY here with some feedback! I feel that this poem was great! Very full of detail! The funny thing is it reminds me of Katniss from Hunger Games! lol, ...
Jan 14, 2015 -
Re: The Light Doesn't Shine Here (Two weeks before the present time)
Hi! CHRISSY here for a review! I loved it! This was very different. Almost like a phantom stalker! I did not exactly understand what what happening at first, but it ...
Jan 14, 2015 -
Re: A Sweet Game of Suicide
OMG, This was so great! It was morbid! My kind of story! Know, this feels like something I would write! This was spine chilling! If I had to change one ...
Jan 14, 2015 -
Re: The Disappearance of Elliot Kelley
This is great! This is good, and a great solid story, knowing that you only are allowed 650 words! There are a few changes I would make though. This maybe ...
Jan 14, 2015 -
Re: Angel Tears - Prologue
This is pretty good! I think it is depressing, but a good idea. If it were up to me, I would make it longer, and explain more. Who is the ...
Jan 14, 2015 -
Re: Airport Notebook
I think this was sweet! I think it was awesome that this person happened to stumble upon that man, who turned his life around! I think it is cool how ...
Jan 13, 2015 -
Re: Be Well
This is such a gripping poem! I kept reading, and the phrases were so unique! What inspired you? I think that in the poem you should say who Lucifer is. ...
Jan 12, 2015 -
Re: Why Are We So Stubborn?
This is so beautiful! So true, and this is a lot of what people these days have a problem with! We all are arrogant, and try to sound tough, and ...
Jan 10, 2015 -
Re: Left Brain vs. Right Brain
This is great! It is like a brain war! Very funny, and I love when it gets to here: Left Brain: YOU DO NOT KNOW WHO YOU ARE MESSING WITH! ...
Jan 9, 2015 -
Re: there was a time when my friends included everyone who smiled back
This was beautiful! It was like the story of out lives, and so true! We all go through these things, and what we all learn! I am only halfway, but ...
Jan 8, 2015 -
Re: So, like, if I could sing people would like me?
I love this! You are having a internal conflict kind of thing going on here! It is cool, and I feel that you do not have to worry! Being popular ...
Jan 8, 2015 -
Re: Hey, wisegirl22
This was a cool idea! To write to your future self! I have done that, just wrote a note, put some random stuff in a tin, and hid it in ...
Jan 8, 2015 -
Re: Blank Space, Parody
WOW! This was great! It is so original, and a great twist to this song! YWS edition! I agree with Nightmare with capitalization in the beginning of the verses, but ...
Jan 3, 2015