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This was great! I was about to pass out, I thought that Jon was really dead for a second Lol. I hope he kills Ariel. That stupid broad. How could ...

XD, this one was really funny. I think I like Quinn in his drunk state. It sort of scared me at the end though, I'd thought he'd been taken. Lol, ...

something that according to the New York Times had become "bizarrely complicated...bloated and trivial...hyped-up," and I didn't necessarily disagree **XD, hehe, I love this so far. It's very Brad of ...

Wow Brad, this was amazing. You'd have to be incredibly smart to write something like this, and I've been wowed with every chapter:). Those are very odd circumstances. I really ...

I liked this, it was very... errie and interesting and I loved the description along with the point of view. Will there be a continuation of this? It's fine alone ...

This was great Brad. The word usage was amazing, but of course I would expect that of you lol. You're teasing me! Another flashback like thing and I'm getting so ...

ANOTHER flashback? These are just some really lucky days :)! I love this side of Kyle. He was so much...softer than he is now in the present. This Kyle/Jon relationship ...

Awww, :( . What's wrong with Kyle. He could have finally told Jon that he loved him. I understand though, everything that was going on in his mind. It's just ...

Two flashbacks in a row! This one was great XD. Kyle fell ontop of Jon, how clumsy. Did he do that on purpose or was it really an accident? lol. ...

Omg they're so cute! I can't believe Jon was talking too his backpack, it's always so nice to know what they were like when they were younger. Kyle was so...Kyle, ...

I really like the way this flowed. At first I was concerned becuase the way the lines were set out. But after reading this about four times I felt a ...

fan side: OMG! :cry: That was so sad! I didn't expect that at all Vernon! Usually people just say that the person was raped but I actually had to read ...

This was a really good one. We're starting to find more about Quinn(which I've been dying for) and the flashback was a great touch. I didn't know that Alex was ...

This was a really beautiful story. I must say that I didn't expect the girl to die in the end, that was a very nice touch, it only made the ...

It had a very nice and comforting concept but the flow is sort of off for me. The lines aren't all matched up and yet they have the same rhyming ...