Riedawriter23

Chapter II: Law and Magic Before she placed the cellphone back into the pockets of her skirt, Pikara looked at the time, displayed at the top right corner of the ...

First of all, that was the best beginning I've ever read. Anything that starts out with tongue tricks is bound to be awesome. lol. And omg! There was the action ...

"Wha? No, man. *I don't know if the wha here was unfinished on purpose. lol "When part of the continent sank into the earth, it caused a decrease in the ...

After the end I finally got the whole thing and then read it again with a feeling of accomplishment. lol. This DID make sense. Very good sense actually. And it ...

I'm just going to try it with spacing to see how it looks. Of Pigments and Protons The light caged in your eyes is released, spun of glass, and liquid ...

"Hush," Kyle interrupted. "This vavcation is non-negotiable. *vavcation=vacation. That was all I saw wrong that hasn't already been said. On that not, I really liked this! I think it was ...

I liked this poem very much. I think the isolations every once in a while (was it every other stanza?) just drove your meaning further. Though some words were cliche, ...

B oy and a girl, You also might want to add "A" in front of this so it makes more sense. the best of friends. From elementary to high school ...

I really liked the simple and meaningful feeling to this. The punctuation was a little off for me. Sometimes there and sometimes not, but otherwise I really liked this. Dust ...

I agree with Clau. This seemed pretty cliche to me. I think that it was a good poem, don't get me wrong. But the words, "heart" "war" "cold" "love" they're ...

I did like this poem though I have to agree with the previous comments that the repetition knocked it down a notch. The paper watched his creator, Ever-drinking in with ...

I really liked this poem. It just had so many levels and the way it was presented was awesome. My favorite line, it was other's as well, was "And her ...

*GASP* He would never! XD And I bet you that people would bow and chant without mindcontrol anyways ;). lol. This was hilarious! I definately want to read more...even though ...

I agree with Clau. It was a sweet poem, I loved the description in it and the beginning was really eye catching. Though I feel that more emotion needs to ...

Lol, this was awesome! I think the beginning could use a little more just because the rhyme seemed a little off at first but otherwise I really liked this. You ...