RepublicOfCoter

Hey! I quite enjoyed this poem. It had very good imagery. It lacked in length and punctuation, so please extend it if you want. I like poems like this-depressing, despair, ...

Hey! I didn't mind this poem but it needs some work. The imagery is there but probably the flow is missing as well as a generally direction. It feels incomplete, ...

Hey. I really liked this poem. Simply fantastic! It has so much meaning and was written perfectly. At first I thought it looked a bit daunting by the length of ...

Hey! Welcome to another piece of the endlessness that we call YWS! Great to see new work, this one in particular. For a newbee, this is excellent! I really enjoyed ...

Hey. This was great! It started off wonderfully with good length. It gradually got better and better as I read further on. Beautifully written throughout and wonderful choice of words. ...

Hey. Amazing haiku! It was the first I have ever read but I have heard many in the past. You linked them beautifully and the words used were excellent. Great ...

Hey! I didn't mind this poem, it was a very good first attempt but I do believe that it needs some work to be done. First of all, it's one ...

Hey fiction903! I would have to agree with kingolions-it was an interesting poem. It isn't often that you stumble across these type of poems-some are hits while some are misses. ...

Hey SilentRain! I quite enjoyed this poem. The imagery you use is fantastic! Full of meaning and emotions. Descriptions were well thought and written with good use of words. I ...

Hey kingolions, I didn't mind this poem but I thought that it was a bit cliche-I have read many poems like this before. I'm not annoyed but just a little ...

Hey Cap! You should consider to start writing a blog. I suggest this because this really isn't considered a a poem. You have tied both a blog and a poem ...

Hey kingolions! I am a keen reader of the Misfortunate Happenings Series and I do enjoy reading them. Like you stated in the beginning, some are hits and misses but ...

Hey artlover2227! Hopefully you remember me, I'm RepublicOfCoter and you reviewed one of my poems which I'd just like to say, "Thank You". Now to your poem. I like the ...

Hey Cap! Please tell your cousin that I quite enjoyed this little poem. It's nice and simple yet it describes harshness. Beautifully written and well thought. Claps for you! You ...

Hey Cap! I'm not quite sure what to make of this. It isn't bad yet it isn't good. It comes off as more as guidance of some sort. No spelling ...