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Re: Daytura in Wonderland
Hey watchmeburn! This wasn't one of the best short stories I have read. I was quite disappointed with it, thinking it was going to be a good read because you ...
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: The blood-stained floors
Hey RedLeaf! This is my first review of any of your work and before I begin, I would like to warn you that I am a harsh reviewed most of ...
Sep 21, 2010 -
Re: Illusion
Hey watchmeburn! This is the first time I've ever reviewed any of your pieces so, before I begin, I would just like to warn you that I can be a ...
Sep 21, 2010 -
Re: What Happens after life?
Hey CaptianRandom, For starters, it was bland. It had no emotion because you constantly asked questions. A poem is supposed to be filled with emotion and description. It is a ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: My death wish
Hey retrodisco666! I seem to have developed a habit of reviewing your poems. It might be good but it might be bad (joking). It was beautiful. i really did love ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Inner Light
Hey MegaMoo! At first glance, this isn't structured at all like a normal poem. It should really be broken into stanzas which what really let this poem down. I really ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Magic
Hey SakuraFallsSweetly♥! This was an interesting poem which I actually quite enjoyed (which is quite hard to achieve as I am a hard man to please). First things first: I ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Flight Of The Griffin
Hey thatboy! This is quite interesting. You have conjured up a poem that practically tells us all about griffins! That's originality right there! You could publish this and people would ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: With Much Regret, I Do
Hey Suzanne! I am here to review you on this wonderful Sunday evening which happens to be Reviewing Day! I quite enjoyed this. It brings out a discussion which probably ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: The Last Words
Hey Hibiscus! It was very creative. I like you whole interpretation on Utopia. But how would you go about to do this? It was very interesting to imagine how a ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Jodie’s House
Hey Matt Bellamy! I'd like to day that this was quite interesting! I assume it was through the eyes of a young girl? And that her mother is having an ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Jealousy
Hey wishonafallingpetal! I loved this poem. Perfect. Absolutely amazing. After I had finished the last line, all I could say was "Yes! Yes! Yes!" I had to agree with everything ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: How it really is
Hey retrodisco666! I liked this poem but I totally disagree. I know that it is your opinion but I didn't like it one bit. I really disagree. I think that ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: The Grinning Man
Hey blackbird12! I liked this poem. I'm not quite sure what to say about this. It was a bit confusing a times but it provoked quite an interesting idea. I'm ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: The Feeling of Death
Hey Jon! I really liked this poem. It was really touching. It had great personality and was written extremely well. Some parts I thought could do without rhyming. I didn't ...
Jul 25, 2010
