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Heggo Baby < 33333 So... review time. :) The 4th apostrophe on the 5th word - I always comment when people use numbers as numerals in their work as opposed ...

I'm not exactly sure what the purpose of focus is for this piece. I like the fact it is short and simple. Connotations between life and joy make it a ...

Yes, I have given you a like for this appalling work for the sheer audacity it must have taken you to post it. I have no idea where to begin ...

I knew before I even got to the heart part that this was what this piece was going to be about! :D Even the title: Fragile, gave a hint. All ...

Hey! You focus on some interesting thoughts related to the idea of 'Existence' here, which seems really relevant to you as a person. 'the house of my thoughts' I thought, ...

Heggo! -hugs- Ok, so you already know I read this. Last year! O.O How strange. (giggles) anyways. I thought I would be nice and give you a review. Plus, I ...

I do love a good book. This is a very short opening entry. But I admire the length. Was the prologue necessary? I'm not sure. It's the sort of thing ...

Ok this piece is really long... XD WWW (what went well) 1. the interaction between the characters and their general characterisation, you got them to sound like real people 2. ...

Let's address the opening criticism. This work is not as you put it, 'terrible.' Now the actual work. In the italics section... This addition is a really good idea because ...

'I’m going to bash her face in. I’m going to rub her nose in the carpet. I’m going to make her clean up the mess she made.' Yikes. This is ...

Firstly, you reference great musicians here: Bob Dylan, Jimi Hendrix etc. Yay :) Now for the review. I liked this piece. However, I feel that the formatting is appalling. To ...

Loving the French title. That is why I decided to read this piece. :) So... the old version. I really like this. Your vocabulary. 'Pounding, pounding Thoughts resounding' - this ...

"Fuck you" is defense," - yes it is. XD I didn't know where this was going to go, judging from the title. I like the way you explain what it ...

Hello. Me here to review. So...you start this work with a great intellectual statement. This is then completely contradicted by your references to Ke$ha and Nicki Minaj. How on earth ...

Title drew me in. The piece threw me out. Mainly because I disagree with most of the points made therein. '“You are nothing, worthless, and you will never amount to ...