Renard

Hello. First of all, I think this work is far too long for its style. Having said that, the massive paragraphs that make up the work need to be broken ...

I loved the title when I saw this in the listing. And the work is great too. ‘You people walk so slowly, When you're going down the hall. And your ...

Right. I am going to have to comment on this now. This is one of many short works about the issue of cutting. You are representing a bold view here: ...

HOLA! My boyfriend. < 33333333 Now *ahem* Review. As promised. I read the original work (Pornography Kiss) where this came from, so I know the history, which prepared me for ...

Right, this has one of the best opening lines I have seen In all honesty, I was expecting to start reading a professional novel. I am jealous of this line: ...

Hello! Me here to review I am going to open with a criticism, because it is the only one I have. ‘It takes one second, one moment,’ – These opening ...

The current trend of really short works on YWS at the moment means this work fits right in. So here goes a line by line analysis: ‘Simmering scarlet’ – I ...

Wow. I love this work. For many reasons. Firstly, it’s very clever. We are dealing with appearances here, and people judging a book by its cover, which you completely dispel ...

Good job!  No problems with spelling and grammar that I saw. I liked the content of the story, especially the interaction between characters such as: ‘“Gu-gu-guests!” His wife mocked ...

Heggo. I can assume there is some sort of formatting issue here, due to all of this: “You cannot smoke in here” / you can smoke outside. “This is a ...

Ok, so this work is really clever. :D I love the way you have captured the way in which people in this situation thing and how you have managed to ...

I enjoyed reading this, but I felt like there were moments it was a bit confusing. For example: 'Pines, palms, decorative bushes. A lot of those bushes.' Lots of repetition. ...

'The day's become a dull one, An endless, tiring bore.' I don't think I have ever seen anyone capture boredom so effortlessly and accurately. The work was both short and ...

So reading this work is kind of reminiscent for me to watching a horror movie. Very spooky. :D I particularly think your description is good here: 'Beck is thrown into ...

Hello! I am here to review another of your 'unique' works. dear mum n dad, - it should have a capital 'D' for Dear, 'n' should and, I imagine. This ...