Renard

This work fills me full of questions. I know you explain at the beginning that this is completely like unhampered by thought layout, but at the same time it works. ...

Hey. I like what you say in the description about writing the poem for yourself - and it's true - I get the impression that this work is very personal ...

Hmmm. Firstly: I am loving your novel. :) Secondly: this chapter kind of makes me hate Robert! Lulz. Not only because he is arrogant, presumptuous and talks about himself all ...

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Hello. Your poem's title was what intrigued me. And when I started reading, I had high hopes for this piece. However. I find myself disagreeing with all the major points ...

Good evening darling! Stop fussing that this chapter is going to be bad! Because it isn't! :D And you haven't disappointed me :p So... good points: 1. Robert's character progression ...

heyo! I feel like this work is kinda melodramatic. Maybe not necessarily in a bad way... but you use a lot of fancy language: 'en finale.' you get your point ...

Thank you. Thank you for using dialogue for the opening. I love these kind of media res openings. Yay. ‘Pens down boys. Did you hear me Johnson? You won’t get ...

This chapter sounds like a song at the very beginning: Six history boys were were. Six history boys we are. The best six history boys there will ever be. And ...

Alright. So you've chosen very good names for the cast here. i wonder where they all came from. Firstly, since the ending makes such a bold impact: And that made ...

I have more comments about structure in this chapter, than anything else. Obviously, we are working our way through the victims and how they are all dead by the end ...

Now, contrary to the last piece, I REALLY liked this chapter. The opening is strong: They were already there when I arrived. The four of them. And your narrative voice ...

More reviews, as promised. So as I'm reading this, I am realising you open up to a pretty big cast basis. Now, having loads of characters is one thing, not ...

Hello So, I like the repetition at the beginning: 'I was always...' it's very definitive of narrative voice. Good start. In terms of characterisation, I like the idea of having ...

Heyyyy So. I told you some of my thoughts about this when I first read it; and I stand by my original observation that is is very blunt. Especially the ...