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I feel very compelled to write a review after reading this. This hits very close to home for me in two ways. Number one, I've been in the main character's ...

“Isabelle! If you don’t get downstairs this instant, I’ll be late again!” Mom’s voice floats up the stairwell. Judging by the explanation point and what she's saying I think 'floats' ...

I'm not a guy but I have read your story, and didn't want to move on before letting you know what I think. I don't think you did a bad ...

This sounds like an amazing idea, but here it is so confusing. You have a lot going on in this one paragraph and it's all jumbled together awkwardly. There's a ...

That! Was hilarious! I'm in hysterics right now; my family probably thinks I've lost my marbles. Well done. I think you should expand this for the rest of the family. ...

Eight-pointed, satin star that longing tourists depict. Eight directions to voyage before falling onto the bended knees on the maiden snow and silently pray to God, thanking him that there ...

I have goosebumps. You're my hero for having the courage to write down step by step how it happened, and admitting the parts that I know make you feel undeserved ...

Tell me what you think. (This is my first poem, hope you like it) :D. Wind whips at my hair through the open bus window, Creating a witch-like pose around ...

I attempted to quote this and make suggestions in bold, but it didn't work becuase I had no suggestions. Iy was perfect. I loved the alliteration, sometime it annoys me ...

Two broad-shouldered, disfigured men stomped though an old log cabin, weapons hanging off their belts and in their muscular hands. A petite young woman stood inside the house, ready for ...

Hello Eddie! Great job here, but I'm rather biased. This if one of my favorite forms of poetry. I enjoy poetry that shows us something the writer feels, but still ...

[quote="Vasticity"] I'm accepting all criticisms and approvals. Please note that I do not write books, I'm more into movie scripts. Since there isn't really a section for that, I've decided ...

Hello there Emeraldcity! I read your story here the other day but didn't have time to tell you what I thought, so here I am again to fill you in ...

Should that be 'has' rather than 'had? He is not one to meddle with words . Unusual for his trade, which is of a devious kind. Rather, he is a ...

My soul is like a well, an anchor is my love. Tears are wells of despair in my own well of soul . This line confuses me! These wells tear; ...