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RedApril29th

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: According To... Prologue

    Hey there, RedApril29th here! You're a fantastic writer, I wish I had your abilities! Your story makes us long for more and stops us to really think about it. We ...

    Sat Mar 15, 2014 4:37 am
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Other Re: Grounded

    Hey, this is Redapril29th! This would be a good song, I think. I'm not really a professional but if you had the right person singing it, the right instruments, the ...

    Sat Mar 15, 2014 4:34 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: As We Get Older

    Hello, this is RedApril29th! I absolutely love your poem. Its so true. When I was younger, I never saw all the tragedies behind those sullen eyes. I never heard the ...

    Sat Mar 15, 2014 4:30 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Fly

    Hello! This is RedApril29th, here to gladly review your poem! I really love this. It's so easy to understand, and even easier to relate to. The pain of having your ...

    Sat Mar 15, 2014 4:26 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: caskets without funerals

    Hello, this is RedApril29th here to review your poem 'My House is a Casket Without a Funeral'! I will review it piece by piece and give my opinion and perspective ...

    Sun Sep 22, 2013 7:39 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: rippling

    Hello, RedApril29th here to review for you! I will be reviewing it piece by piece and expressing my thoughts as I go along. Since I am doing this, they may ...

    Sun Sep 22, 2013 7:29 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: In Debt

    Hello, this is RedApril29th here to review your poem "In Debt"! I'm not an expect on poems, so I have no idea what 'stanzas' and all that are but I ...

    Sun Sep 22, 2013 7:18 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A gentle fear.

    Hello! This is RedApril29th reviewing your poem "A Gentle Fear". I typically review short poems, as yours is. It gives me more time to focus each line, truly think it ...

    Sun Sep 22, 2013 4:08 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: "Follow Your Dreams"

    Hello there, DragonLily! I am here to review your post of a poem called "Follow Your Dreams". You say that the poem was made in around thirty seconds. If this ...

    Sun Sep 22, 2013 3:56 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Bridge ~ Into the Night

    You did a wonderful job! I love the whole set up for it, the lines look great. I also love how you emphasize on some of the words, such as ...

    Sun Aug 25, 2013 10:09 pm
  • Poetry » Health, Humor Re: The Irony of Health-Food Junkies

    Hello there! I'm RedApril29th here to give you my opinion of your poem. I dislike it, quite a bit, in all honesty. I think it sends a negative message that ...

    Sat Aug 24, 2013 6:53 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: lethargy

    Hello, Persy! This is RedApril29th. The poem is very nice but I've picked out one flaw with it. The line, "pouty lips curling around his hand-rolled cigarette" seems to be ...

    Sat Jul 27, 2013 12:09 am
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: I Tried

    Oh my gosh! Hello there, Wonder! This is RedApril29th, reviewing you. 10/10. This hits home so hard! A guy I had dated was everything for me. He treated me like ...

    Thu Jul 25, 2013 5:44 am
  • Lyrics » Romantic, General Re: Kiss Me Back

    Hello there, dark_angel05. Love your avatar, by the way. Anyway, I'm here to give you a review! You have a lot of talent, I can tell that from reading this. ...

    Thu Jul 25, 2013 4:05 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: Humanity

    I absolutely love this! You did a very wonderful job on it. It's beautiful, I'd like to say breath-taking. It's so true, as well. It speaks to me. I love ...

    Thu Jul 25, 2013 3:38 am


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