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Re: Appearance
*clapping enthusiastically* This is a most needed poem that I feel that a lot of people need to hear! I love this! I needed this! It really makes you feel ...
Mar 18, 2018 -
Re: Back to the Beginning Chapter 2
Hey Raven Black here! I'm going to review this as I go along :-) - I think you could have written something better than: 'got us all to shut up'. ...
Mar 17, 2018 -
Re: A Wantasy Adventure ~ CHP. 2 (Editing #1)
Hey raven black here! I'll review this as I go xD -This is probably because I haven't read the first chapter but I'm very confused to what this capsule is ...
Jul 29, 2017 -
Re: Such Tracks- Chapter 10 FINALE
Hey Raven Black here! I'll review this as I go along :-D - 'So Mr. Wadkins(the mayor) thinks I cheated 'in' a race I won and now I'm racing again ...
Jul 8, 2017 -
Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 20
Hey Raven Black here! I'll review this as I go along :-D - Omg! Our characters share the same name! (Sorry just had to point that out xD) - “He ...
Jul 3, 2017 -
Re: Within my blood (Epilogue)
Hey Raven Black here! I'll review this as I read along :D - I like the description of the 'air curling around her fingers' - I like the contrasts of ...
Jul 3, 2017 -
Re: Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 16 pt. 1
Hey Raven Black here! I'll review this as I go along :-D - Unique way of starting a chapter, very refreshing to see. :-) -I like the names of the ...
Jun 27, 2017 -
Re: Off Court - Chapter 6.1
Hey Raven Black here. I'm going to review this as I go along :-D - That's the most weird but funny description of food I've ever seen xD -'That was ...
Jun 27, 2017 -
Re: You never told me
Hey Raven Black here! I'll review this as I go along. if life were just a prison for you' Great metaphor! -Oh My God! I wasn't excepting that. (You knew ...
Jun 24, 2017 -
Re: Masquerade Series ~ Chapter One (Revised) added chapters 2-3
Hey Raven Black here :-D I'll review as I go along. - 'King Julius of the witches and Queen Olivia of the shifters walked through the forest.' I don' think ...
Jun 24, 2017 -
Re: Savage
Hey Raven Black here! I'll review this as I go along :-D - 'He envied her ability to always look so well put together.' so do i T_T - I'm ...
Jun 17, 2017 -
Re: Something different=Hope? Realization?
Hey Raven Black here! I'll review this as I go along. - Oh God, I hate needles! T_T I feel so nervous - In my opinion ('Alex laughed, a hard, ...
Jun 17, 2017 -
Re: The Mermaid and her Shark (part one)
Hey Raven Black here! I'm going to review this as I go along :-D - Haha I love the name 'Tide and Sweep' as a game :-D - 'my voice ...
Jun 8, 2017 -
Re: The Confession
Hey Raven Black here! I'm going to review this as I go along :-D - "I'm sorry, Mom... I can't lie to you any longer." Oh no what's he done? ...
Jun 5, 2017 -
Re: Consequences
Hey Raven Black Here! This is so good! Short yet effective! I had a feeling the King was going to regret his decision but I didn't feel bad for him, ...
Jun 5, 2017