Raven

It's cute. I was a bit confused though, because there's a guy who's unknown, but in the second to the last stanza, because of the questions, I felt that there ...

I like all the adjective. That's the problem that I have with my poetry. I loved it. The flow was excellent, and the imagry was amazing, though I was confused ...

This is really cute. I enjoyed it.

I like it. Short and sweet.

I meant bed, like she's a whore or something.

I called my boss and quit my job; The payment for my bread . Bread?

I like how in the beginning, it's like (you?) can't wait to live; but in the end, you want to die, but you're secretly hoping someone will catch you and ...

Nice. Really nice. It's interesting and extrely unique. Is there going to be anymore?

I wanted the last stanza to have a different rhythm than the others. Where's the typo?

Wow. wow. I love it. It was on the creepy side, but a little bit of crazy. It was very good. I reaklly liked the couplets. That's a very unique ...

I agree, but I wanted a twist in the poem. People are always talking about predictable stuff, and I wanted to write something different.

I love dark poems. I'm really morbid that way. I like this one a lot. I'm not sure of the meaning, but I don't go for meaning in a poem. ...

I don't get what everyone doesn't understand. I liekd it. It made perfect sense too me.

You don't have to color the text, it's all right. Or put astriek's in between your stanzas, but all that's just preference. Yeah I know but I like to

anyone can write this? no one has before, so I did.