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Re: Thy Kingdom Come
Hey! This poem reminds me of my own journey to faith! I really enjoyed this because, even though, it's a harder topic to talk about and has a deeper meaning, ...
Mar 14, 2018 -
Re: My Garden
Hey! *waves hand frantically* I now have to go read all the rest of your work because this was absolutely phenomenal! As I was reading this, I envisioned the scenes ...
Mar 11, 2018 -
Re: you swallowed me whole
Hey! I love writing poetry because I feel as though it's great when you have those burst of creative genius! I'll assume the lowercase letters are a creative option and ...
Jan 11, 2018 -
Re: Eat Something
Hey! You already have some awesome feedback, and there's nothing more I could say to make it better. I think you don't need to repeat somedays in the twelfth line. ...
Dec 5, 2017 -
Re: Christmas Fears
Holy Guacamole!!!! This is a fantastic piece of work! it kind of feels similar to the Chucky movies. You know the ones where the red headed doll tries to kill ...
Dec 5, 2017 -
Re: Boss Monster catches small-town fever at the holiday parade
Hey! This isn't exactly a long review, but i wanted to tell you how much I adore your font! Also, I really love the small town feel of this piece. ...
Dec 5, 2017 -
Re: Alive
Hey! Overall, I really enjoyed the concept of this poem. Somehow, there comes off as an emptiness to the feeling of the poem, that I am almost sure the character ...
Dec 5, 2017 -
Re: bowing standing flying
Hi! For being written in only five minutes, it's not really bad! It has a lot of potentially! For the three different stanzas, I see three different things that could ...
Oct 8, 2017 -
Re: Hello, Everyone
Hey! I'm excited to go along this journey with you as you find out what your writing purpose is. Sometimes I think we can find purpose in our audience as ...
Oct 1, 2017 -
Re: Years
Hi! I might be a little in love with this poem and all of its similes. This isn't going to be much of a review because I don't think you ...
Oct 22, 2016 -
Re: Sleep is for the Weak
Hi!! I really enjoyed this poem. It has a unique touch to it. There only a few things that seem to need fixing. In the second line, the word So ...
Oct 22, 2016 -
Re: The Art of Love
Hello! This is wonderful! The very idea is soul tingling. I would look back through for spelling errors and punctuation mishaps. The only real problem I have is that i ...
Oct 19, 2016 -
Re: bAck Bone of a maN
Hi! There are a few things I don't understand. Why are random letters capitalized in the title? Then in your actual poem you don't capitalize anything, even the word I. ...
Oct 19, 2016 -
Re: Deleted 67
Hi! First, I want to express you how magnificent I truly think this piece is. You have woven a beautiful story of hurt and love. I commend you for the ...
Oct 19, 2016 -
Re: Prologue
Hi! Rascalover here with a review, hopefully a helpful one! First off, I'd like to congratulate you on becoming a new member! If you have any questions or need any ...
Oct 19, 2016
