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I liked this. It's an old idea turned into orginality :) I see that some of the other reviewers have been nit picky about grammar so I won't be. Overall: ...

Wow, I really like this. The flow is great and it kept my attention through the whole thing. If there are any errors they are miniscule and I didn't catch ...

Hello, welcome to YWS! I do have to mention that we tend to follow one rule and that is to review two other pieces of work before posting our own. ...

A very happy welcome to YWS. There is a rule that you have to review two pieces of work before you post one of you own. This is to ensure ...

I am glad to introduce myself Im Tiffany, Welcome to YWS, and here it's a rule that you have to review two other works before you post one. please pm ...

“A beer or a shot or something. You know I like ‘em strong.” He winked and kissed my lips roughly before sending me on my way. It should be: A ...

I must agree this is one amazing piece. It leaves me wondering how she was found, and who was the jerk who stole her childhood. (i know she was older ...

The human mind is difficult to predict, This is bland, and kind of boring. You need the opening line to draw the readers in and hook them so that they're ...

Before I review this I want to give you a big happy welcome to YWS and to let you know that before you post somthing you have to give two ...

Im sorry to say that this won't be a very helpful review, but I love this piece and would be very grateful if you pmed me when you posted more ...

I am Rufus Little. This is my story. A story of the present days and a lot of harking back to the past. I had to say, I just love ...

I smiled as I watched a clear, crystal wave bash against the hard rocks of the shore like a lion attacking it's pray. I had the most perfect life. Nothing ...

I have never critqued lyrics before, but I just waned to tell you that I loved it! I think it would be a very well written and sang song. I ...

“Annie by having sex with you I have given myself only two options and you only one.” There should be a comma after Annie :) I am only 19. I ...

Like the other reviewers I think this poem would be better if the lines were short and choppy. For example: Thousands of lives rest on a single blade. The choice ...