Nice job with this! You did quite well with the imagery and the flow of the poem. I liked the last stanza the most.
There's only one thing that I can point out:
"I whisper to you in the night,
I tell my fears, admit my lies.
An owl hoots- I jump in fright-
I watch as it
Spreads wings and flies."
Shouldn't it be 'spreads its wings and flies?'
Overall, good work! Keep it up! ^^
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