Rascalover

Hello, I'm glad to be your reviewer for today:) I am also surprised there haven't been more reviews. There was good. I love the imagery you use This idea of ...

Hello, I'm so happy to welcome you to YWS! I'm always pleased to be your reviewer for today:). Now before I review this piece I just want to let you ...

I remember that, when I was small, I found a baby robin beneath a tree. This sentence is a little wordy to be an opening sentence. i say take out ...

Hello, Iam so glad to be your reviewer for today:) Now on with the review. I'll just point out what needs alittle fixin' :) Running like hell and scarred. Just ...

Well Hey there :) i was stumbling my way around and look at what I found:) Anywho on with the review: Over it has come a long way. The gradualness ...

Hello, Welcome to YWS! I'm happy to be your reviewer for today :) With what the person before me said I thought this poem was very well written and enjoyable. ...

Hello, Im glad to be your reviewer for today :). ASnywho, about your poem, the flow seems to be choppy and short. It flows then it doesnt then it does ...

Hello Deathrose13, I'm happy to welcome you into YWS. Theres only one rule here. You have to review two other pieces of work before you post a piece of your ...

Everything was quiet I couldn’t hear a sound, I felt empty. There should be a comma between quiet and I I sat up slowly making every move seem like it ...

The two reviewers above me have pretty much done the whole critque. As a reader I have to tell you this all went a little too fast. Normally her family ...

Hey Welcome to YWS! I would to let you know that to post a piece of work you have to review two other pieces of work. This ensures everyones piece ...

Welcome to YWS! I would be happy to have been the first one to review this, but it seems as though you haven't followed our one simply rule, and that's ...

They said all those things just to scare you, of course. I think you tried really hard to rhyme which left you unneeded things. I don't of course should be ...

“Yeah, Mom, I’ll be there in about five minutes.” “I can’t wait to see you! Are you sure you can’t go just a little faster?” I laughed. “No, Mom. I’m ...

Wow, i love how demanding and percise this is. You have done a wonderful job with imagery and showing. i really have nothing bad to say about this poem, and ...