Hello!
Okayyy, overall, a good poem. It flows, but yes, just kind of hits a dead end which is not such a good thing. Where you running out of stuff to say, or just felt like ending it there? Either way, you can never have a too-long poem in my opinion. I didn't feel as if there was enough emotion in this poem. It was a little too bland. Yes, the reader will understand you like the person, but if i'm correct, you're trying to say your deeply in love?
Otherwise, Wonderful! Can't wait for more poems!!
~*Hailey, <3
Points: 890
Reviews: 33
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