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Hi!! This is a really interesting piece. I think with a few more descriptions instead of telling us what happened would try this into a great piece. For example, "the ...

OMGOSH!! Oh hi! So, I am in love with this short story. There were some grammar and punctuational errors, but some times those can be done on purpose, and they ...

Hi!! I like the flow and beat of this poem, but I think there could be room for improvement. The word loneliness in line eight does not seem to fit ...

Hi!! This feels like a classic poem. I love how it can be interpreted multiple different ways without force. I love the back and forth of the characters. There's actually ...

Hi!! I absolutely loved the description in this piece! The punctuation kind of threw me off in some of the stanzas, but other than that, I really enjoyed this poem. ...

Hi!! From the description, it sounded like you were writing from multiple women's point of view, but from the look of this piece you are telling only one story. I ...

Hi!! I really enjoy the start of this, but I'm going to be honest, I didn't get all the way through it. I think maybe if you sectioned it into ...

Hi!! Oh. My. Gosh. I absolutely love this and ate it up while reading it. I can't wait to go back and the chapters before hand, but even though this ...

Hi!! This piece was quite interesting and I thoroughly enjoyed it. As a reader, the word lost was a little redundant in the first stanza, and the last line of ...

Hi!! Aside from a few grammatical errors and wording mishaps, this is a solid piece of work. I really enjoyed all the details and imagery you put into this piece, ...

Hi!! In a writing class I recently took, my professor told us writing poetry about love was extremely hard because you would have to read a hundred love poems and ...

Hi!! This has great potential! I really like the concept of this short story that a kind person can allow the world to change them and their efforts, and the ...

Hi!! I really enjoyed this piece and with some elbow grease and work, I think this will turn out to be an excellent piece of writing. I loved the imagery ...

Hi!! I really enjoyed the imagery and imagination it took to put this piece together! There are a few things that confused me, but in all I really like reading ...

Hi!! Here are some minor details that stood out to me: "You look me from behind," This sounds off to me, maybe try adding the word at after look. "Not ...