Rainn

Awesome! When I read this, I think of politics. I think that if you rhymed a few more words, that this poem would flow better. I really like this poem, ...

Cool, I like it. It is very easy to read. It is strong and soulful. I find it nice how you portray the girl finding a 'perfect man', then finding ...

This is a beautiful sends a very strong messge. I love how it all flows, it is an easy read. Great job! This is my favorite stanza: ---------------------------------------- You are ...

All of my edits are in parentheses(). It's just what I think, you don't have to change it if you like the way it is. Seeing the world through different ...

You can see my review of each verse in ()'s -------------------------------------------------------- The air is cold up there they say, --->On these cold winter days.

Very loverly :) I didn't see anything really, except maybe this part here: ------------------------------------------ Why must we be quiet? Why'd we have to wait? I wish mommy would read to ...

This is a beautiful poem, I just have a few minor suggestions or comments. They will be in ()'s. You don't have to take any of them, If you like ...

Here is my edited version, you don't have to take my suggestions if you like the way it is now. Light What is Light? Does it have any Meaning? What ...

This is a very nice poem! This is one of the first poems about the London Bridge. You may want to start thinking about your punctuation. Most of the time ...

Beautiful! I love the you composed this, it speaks a good message. Some of your formatting(if you will) is a bit strange, but not much. I really don't know what ...