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Wow, this has a lot of emotion. For a free verse, It flows nicely. I think you did a great job, I can't really find much to say. As for ...

Hello, InTheTrees. I like your story here, but that is what it is. A story. I don't see the poetry...I think you should at least try to format it. Here ...

Your rhyming is wonderfully done on this, WelcomingExeption. I like the flow and form of it, it reads well in my mind. The only thing that disrupts the flow some ...

Beautiful poem, W&W. Your rhyming and flow are amazing. I don't really have much to say here...I think you did a perfect job on this. Your form is easy to ...

Wonderful poem you have here, Ben! I love your rhyming scheme, and your flow is very nice. One thing I noticed was... Why couldn't if have been easy? I think ...

Wow, your writing is wonderfully done here! I like the way this whole thing fits together and flows. I really can't find anything you could change...I think it is just ...

Hello Adam. I suggest you format it like this...I changed a bit of the punctuation... What if she's a firefly, Who lights up her own world? The angel in that ...

Hey, Anwesha. I will do my best to review your wonderful poem here, my dear. For the first stanza, Is very well composed. I like how you added the "Pray". ...

This is a very, very, beautiful poem. Wow. In the first stanza, you have beautiful words and thought. Maybe there is a person somewhere, typing away his life. Trying to ...

Beautiful poem, Alliyah! This would actually make a great song with a bit of editing! I hear it singing in my head right now.. As for the poem, There isn't ...

Time ticks on, awaiting no one, moves so slowly, yet so fast (This stanza is okay...) It runs on and on, paying no heed to what is gone, moveing, moveing, ...

Hi Aubrie! Nice poem you have going on this here :-) .:Pointers:. And, though silent, moves with out noise. "With out" is spelled as one word, "without". Nor any couple ...

Hello, YoungWriter :3 I don't have much to say, for this is a very sweet little poem you have here. One thing I noticed was you spelled "tires" with a ...

Wow, I like it. This is a very nice poem, Lemon! I love all the expression and feeling you related in this. I think it is very good for midnight ...

Beautiful, amazing poem, Phantom. I love it! My favorite thing about this poem is the image it forms in my mind. When I read this, I see snow gathering around, ...