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Your rhyming is wonderfully done on this, WelcomingExeption. I like the flow and form of it, it reads well in my mind.
The only thing that disrupts the flow some is the last line of the second stanza. I think it is too long. Other than that, I think you did a nice job. Your story is okay, and I love the way that you ended it.
Overall, wonderful job.
~Rainn
Wow. I like spiders! This is like an awesome version of the ITSY BITSY SPIDER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:p 
I see what other stuff you wrote
"cry sweet child"
"dear husband."
"leave the world behind."
WHOOOAAA I BET THEY'RE ALL GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!$
You could make $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$. With this...... Oh I <3 it.....
Oh it's cool.
Makes spiders everywhere happy!!!!!!!!
-Nyanya
I love it. I don't know why, but i really love it